Saturday, January 31, 2015

Words

Over 4000 words today! And it wasn't all that hard to write them, which is a good sign. I wanted to know what happened next, so I couldn't stop writing. That's the best kind of writing in my opinion; it also produces the best writing. Because if you want to know what happens next, the reader will too.

Of course I have to go back and edit it. So the words will diminish. And I don't know whether what I wrote actually makes sense, because I didn't go back through and read it. I just had to get the words down. Having a lot to say is also a good sign. You just have to be careful that the result doesn't seem too rushed, though. But that's less of a problem in an action story anyway; you don't want long flowery passages. You want quick, sharp successions of words. 

Friday, January 30, 2015

Desert Rescue

One of my short stories has got accepted to a magazine!

I sent it to at least one other magazine, which rejected it. But I sent it again, apparently to the right one.

"Desert Rescue" will be published in the February issue of Frostfire Worlds.

Sunday, January 25, 2015

setback

Well, set back 3000 words. That scene wasn't working. I was losing the tension and urgency of the situation, which must be there in order for anyone to want to keep reading. We don't want pages of people talking; it has to be interspersed with action. It at least has to do directly with Jet and what he's facing. Immediacy. His problems.
And focus on one thing at a time, otherwise get bogged down in the complexity and lose Jet and the whole tone and focus of the story.

At least that's my rationalization for why the scene wasn't working. Mainly it wasn't something that made me want to know what happened next; it was an overall feeling more than anything, so it had to go. 

Thursday, January 22, 2015

Future

My book has no title yet. But it is part of an overall series that I have an idea for. Justice Lost was the introduction, the prologue if you will. The next three will be part of an epic trilogy....and after that, there is a possibility of an ongoing series.
I have to write this one first. Because it's more epic in scale, the plot is complex and can be harder to keep track of. But I do have 6,000 words so far. And I have the general idea of where it's going. Jet's new adventure is just beginning. 

Monday, January 19, 2015

Journal

This story is already way more complicated than Justice Lost. I wanted it that way, because I want a longer story. I just hope I can bring everything together, and that Jet doesn't get lost in it all. 

Friday, January 16, 2015

Milestone

I wrote the first (almost) 2 pages of my sequel to Justice Lost today. That's happened before--but this time I think that I have the right direction. Last time, I started a little prematurely, before all the pieces had fallen into place. It's taken almost a year (which I did not expect, considering how fast I wrote Justice Lost) but maybe I had to step away from it, see it from a different perspective, and discover more details before I could move forward. Writing from different POVs has helped, as has developing other stories, and perhaps also my detour into fanfiction--if nothing else, it's given me writing practice.
I've had the basic idea for a long time, and some of my main ideas are still in place. Despite the NaNo novel last year, and the rather uneven short story, and the false start of another first chapter, Jet won't let me give up on him.
The solutions were under my nose; I don't know why I didn't think of them in the first place. They discovered an abundant source of orikal, so of course they'd decide to invade Con. Looking at it from Ash's POV helped me see a radically different side of Mag City, which Jet can't see yet. The same with Sol's POV. Jet has never been able to go down and mingle with the people; he's always had to maintain his distance, like royalty on any world. There are other things which I can't think of right now.
Now, I think I can start writing, and the rest of the pieces can fall into place as I write. I'll be able to see things from ground level, and any future knots will hopefully untangle themselves as I go.
I'm never quite comfortable, always slightly on edge, until I start a writing project and it begins to consume me. That can be hard too, but it's preferable to not writing.

Tuesday, January 6, 2015

journal

A couple things I have learned today:

My NaNo project from last year isn't as bad as I thought. Although it was very hard to write. Something was wrong with it. I'll need someone to look it over. But it may be salvageable after all.

The story I'm writing has a protagonist that is basically anti-Harry Potter. She grows up in a magic academy, but she doesn't have magic, and she feels inferior to the wizards. It's only when she gets out of the magic school that she finds acceptance. 

Saturday, January 3, 2015

Reviews

Justice Lost has another review! I was so happy. Three people think that it deserves 5 stars! Thank you, those who have reviewed! I'm glad you enjoyed the book!

I really need to work on the sequel now. I have so many projects....

For some reason, it's harder to write the sequel. I had the idea and character in my head for several years but the book I just jumped right into and it sped along till the end. A little short--yes. Perhaps a consequence of how it was written. But if it were longer, it might have been slowed down.

Hopefully it will not be another 2 years before the next book. Although it's already been a year....and I haven't started it yet. I have the ideas. Hopefully I'll be able to take them and run with them.

Justice Lost is supposed to be the foundation of a longer series, with Jet as the hero.