Reviews

It's so encouraging when I get good reviews! Justice Lost got a good review on amazon and it encouraged me to begin writing the sequel. I'm working on it now. I've had several false starts with this story. Now I really need to make this one work. But most of all, have fun with it, because that will show in what I write. 

Justice Lost screenplay

I'm working on a screenplay version of Justice Lost. So far I have completed the first three chapters' worth of scenes. I am new to screenwriting, though, so this is a very rough draft. The main thing is to keep everything visual. I think it could make a good movie; however, I ran into a part today that I did not anticipate but should have: the mindreading. How do you portray such a thing on film? I made it so that there was an 'echo-y' voice for the mindreading dialogue, but I'm not sure how to do such 'special' lines in a screenplay. I also made an internal scene that will have to be made with special effects. A lot of this can be portrayed, I think; I've seen it done. But I'm so new at this, it is all an experiment.